Нужна оценка резюме.

[Cheerful Max]

Привет всем, собственно имеется резюме (на англ.яз.), хотелось бы чтобы знающие люди поправили его если что не так. Кину в личку, стучите. Спасибо. ;)

[Буржуй]

Привет всем, собственно имеется резюме (на англ.яз.), хотелось бы чтобы знающие люди поправили его если что не так. Кину в личку, стучите. Спасибо. ;)

Send it in.

[Sixteen]

давайте ево сюды, в открытый доступ. имя тока сотрите и адрес с телефонием, и вперед, мы заценим!

[Odinokiy_Ostrov]

Давай, посылай. Оценим и раскритикуем.

[Буржуй]

Давай, посылай. Оценим и раскритикуем.

not a thing...

[бубенчиков]

Сам решил сначала проверить.

[Cheerful Max]

***** ******

*-**, ********-********* Str., ********, ******, Russia
Telephone: 11-7-***-*******
E-mail: *******@gmail.com

Place and date of birth: *******, Russia; *** **, ****

OBJECTIVE: Seek the Position of Amusement Park Attendant

EDUCATION:

Sept 2006 - present
The Ural University of Tourism, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Faculty: Tourism and hospitality management
Specialty: Tourism management

May 2007 – present
Dancing school of modern choreography ”Emotion Dance Studio”, Ekaterinburg, Russia

Dec 2006 – June 2007
Certificate of improvement of professional skills in Bartending
Bartending School ”Swizzle”, Ekaterinburg, Russia

Sept 2003 – May 2005
Certificate of Course of Rendering of the first medical aid
Interschool Educational Association of Ekaterinburg, Ekaterinburg, Russia

Sept 1996 – May 2006
General Certificate of Secondary Education
Secondary School # ***, Ekaterinburg, Russia

EXPERIENCE:

Aug 2007 – present
Barman
Restaurant ”*****”, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
 Supervise two barman
 Serve alcoholic beverages and cocktails to customers
 Plan menu and alcohol card
 Check with customers to ensure that they are enjoying service and take action to correct any problems
 Inform customers of daily specials

Dec 2007 – present
Network Administrator
Internet provider ”SkyNet on-line”, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
 Adjustment File Transfer Protocol, TCP/IP and LAN

Aug 2006 – Oct 2007
Network Engineer, Computer Hardware Support Technician
Interschool Stadium of Ekaterinburg, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
 Established and adjusted Hardware, Software, TCP/IP and LAN

June – Sept 2003
Ground keeper
Sverdlovsk Regional Student's Group, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
 Cleaned general territory
 Planted trees, shrubs, bulbs, grass and other plants
 Designed flower and other beds
 Sprayed herbicides and pesticides as needed

SKILLS AND ACTIVITIES:

 Fluent English, Knowledge of Spanish, Native Russian
 Computer experience: OC Windows XP, MS Office XP, FTP, Basic TCP/IP, Hardware, Software
 Member of animation and tourist group of The Ural University of Tourism
 The active participant of barmans's competitions of Ekaterinburg
 The active participant of Interuniversity and regional competitions on dances. Dancing direction - Hip-Hop

Засекретился

У меня самого есть несколько вопросов по нему, в чем сомневаюсь:
1. Важен ли опыт работы на компьютере для поиска данного рода работы.
2. Не лучше ли роме банального описания обязанностей написать достижения, или все же принято первое описывать.
3. Правильно ли я использовал времена глаголов, а именно про те места работы где это было... и тама, соответственно, где я работаю.
4. В каком порядке было бы лучше расположить SKILLS AND ACTIONS?

Был еще какой то вопрос, пока не могу вспомнить

[Буржуй]

TAKE IT OUT - Place and date of birth: *******, Russia; *** **, ****

OBJECTIVE: Seek the Position of Amusement Park Attendant (HUH? WTF?)

[RELEVANT ]EDUCATION:

Sept 2006 - present
The Ural University of Tourism, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Faculty: Tourism and hospitality management
Specialty: Tourism management

TAKE IT OUT NONE CARES May 2007 – present
Dancing school of modern choreography ”Emotion Dance Studio”, Ekaterinburg, Russia

TAKE IT OUT NOONE CARES Dec 2006 – June 2007
Certificate of improvement of professional skills in Bartending
Bartending School ”Swizzle”, Ekaterinburg, Russia

TAKE IT OUT NOONE CARES Sept 2003 – May 2005
Certificate of Course of Rendering of the first medical aid
Interschool Educational Association of Ekaterinburg, Ekaterinburg, Russia

Sept 1996 – May 2006
General Certificate of Secondary Education
Secondary School # ***, Ekaterinburg, Russia

[RELEVANT] EXPERIENCE:

Aug 2007 – present
[Bar Attendant]
Restaurant ”*****”, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
Supervise two barman
Serve alcoholic beverages and cocktails to customers
Plan menu and alcohol card
Check with customers to ensure that they are enjoying service and take action to correct any problems
Inform customers of daily specials
(Something sounds strange, not sure what)

Dec 2007 – present
Network Administrator
Internet provider ”SkyNet on-line”, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
Adjustment File Transfer Protocol, TCP/IP and LAN
(Technically makes no sense. What kind of duty is Adjustment File Transfer Protocol, TCP/IP and LAN??)
You mean SUPPORTED Local Area Network running TCPIP and FTP.? What kind of network? Windows/novel/unix?

Aug 2006 – Oct 2007
Network Engineer, Computer Hardware Support Technician
Interschool Stadium of Ekaterinburg, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
Established and [supported] Hardware, Software, TCP/IP and LAN [same as above]

June – Sept 2003
{Gardener?]
Sverdlovsk Regional Student's Group, Ekaterinburg, Russia
Main duties:
Cleaned general territory
Planted trees, shrubs, bulbs, grass and other plants
Designed flower and other beds
Sprayed herbicides and pesticides as needed

SKILLS AND ACTIVITIES:

Fluent Russian and English, Knowledge of Spanish
Member of animation and tourist group of The Ural University of Tourism
The active participant of barmans's competitions of Ekaterinburg
The active participant of Interuniversity and regional competitions on dances.





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I honestly do not see anyoone giving you a job in the states, sorry.

[Cheerful Max]

Еще как дадут, W&T. Не таким давали :34:

[Sixteen]

не бармен. бартендер на американ инглише

worked as a senior bartender, managed two junior bartenders.

кто такой на русском языке амьюзмент парк аттендант?