Нужен маленький HELP!!!

[Galkab]

Спасибо Саш.:34:

[Barr]

ВСЕМ БОЛЬШОЕ СПАСИБО,
даже за то, что так обос.али мое резюме. Может быть даже за это отдельное спасибо.

Особая багодарность ФОМЕ - за то время, которое он уделил.

[Фома]

Согласен с предыдущим оратором - резюме так себе, чтобы не сказать плохое...
Но раз просят про грамматику...

Profile of the company:

company profile

Optimization of interaction of subdivisions.

communication between subdivisions

Consulting in the sphere

in the area

Estimation of investment projects.

evaluation

Construction works.

Just "construction"

and public bodies.

government organizations

University Of Economic and Finance (FinEk).

Economy

Specialty:

Major

Certification about the additional education in the course "economy"

Minor: economy

Extensive experience of analysis

experience in...

and realization

implementation

of projects including large regional once.

ones

Financial analysis of company (group of companies), the consolidation of account.

..., [no the] accounts consolidation

Projects by the audit and the creation of a company organizational structure.

"Projects by the" - тут лишнее

Projects on

See above

setting of administrative calculation,

implemetation of corporate accounting

the procedures of the estimation of efficiency

efficiency evaluation procedures

experience of negotiating, solving the conflicting situations.

negotiation and conflict resolution experience