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[Дженни]

спасибо!
ну... давай, Дженька!

To be honest I always loved only you,
You were man of my dreams, my icon and idol…
All my men somewhat had some of you inside
And what is why I could tolerate them a little

While you are flying between d’Orsay and Prado
Driven by all your passions
I assembled you from the parts I had…
I know how wrong it sounds

One guy was tall and handsome like you,
And I can see your funny side in another
Jack loves himself and Jimmy loves me
But what a shame I can’t find your twin brother !

They all remind me of you sometimes
Sometimes I think I can see you in their eyes
Sometimes I feel like I finally found you
But God cannot do the same mistake twice

And even your soul you let me see couple times
Trough all barriers and walls
It’s still here inside beautiful roses and lilies
And one dead iPhone

And don’t you worry I don’t miss you my friend
I don’t cry thinking about you all day long.
What about all these tornados, and earthquakes, CNN, EuroNews ??
You are always with me and God is always with you….
:115: :115: :115: :115: :115:

Критикуйте !!!!!

[Dafna]

To be honest I always loved only you,
You were man of my dreams, my icon and idol…
All my men somewhat had some of you inside
And what is why I could tolerate them a little

While you are flying between d’Orsay and Prado
Driven by all your passions
I assembled you from the parts I had…
I know how wrong it sounds

One guy was tall and handsome like you,
And I can see your funny side in another
Jack loves himself and Jimmy loves me
But what a shame I can’t find your twin brother !

They all remind me of you sometimes
Sometimes I think I can see you in their eyes
Sometimes I feel like I finally found you
But God cannot do the same mistake twice

And even your soul you let me see couple times
Trough all barriers and walls
It’s still here inside beautiful roses and lilies
And one dead iPhone

And don’t you worry I don’t miss you my friend
I don’t cry thinking about you all day long.
What about all these tornados, and earthquakes, CNN, EuroNews ??
You are always with me and God is always with you….
:115: :115: :115: :115: :115:

Критикуйте !!!!!

ай да, Дженни!)
ай да поэтоесса :115:

переписала )

Спасибо!

[Milonguera]

[COLOR="DarkOrchid"]То бе хонест И алщаыс ловед онлы ёу....

Критикуйте !!!!!

Джении, очень здорово!
I am impressed.
только парочку мест поправь, чтоб по-английски лучше звучало -

And that is why I could tolerate them a little...
But God cannot make the same mistake twice...

[Дженни]

Джении, очень здорово!
I am impressed.
только парочку мест поправь, чтоб по-английски лучше звучало -

And that is why I could tolerate them a little...
But God cannot make the same mistake twice...

Thanks

[Screw101]

Дженни, сама написала? Молодец. От души и очень deep and cute.

P.S. I would not dare to critisize or critique this...

[Дженни]

Дженни, сама написала? Молодец. От души и очень deep and cute.

P.S. I would not dare to critisize or critique this...

нет, перевела вольным переводом...критикуй ...это для дафниного американского дяди

[Screw101]

нет, перевела вольным переводом...критикуй ...это для дафниного американского дяди

А...это перевод русского стишка на английский? Можно попробовать с работы улучшить, если будет время и желание...Сейчас я устал что-то...

[Whoever]

To be honest I always loved only you,
You were man of my dreams, my icon and idol…
All my men somewhat had some of you inside
And what is why I could tolerate them a little

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Критикуйте !!!!!

душу в перевод вложила.
ты ведь про меня писала, да?
мне немного даже страшно.
но ничего, теперь мы точно станем руммейтaми

[Whoever]

нет, перевела вольным переводом...критикуй ...это для дафниного американского дяди

американские дяди эти в ответ достанут лист бумаги и сделают две графы, слева будут положительные качества девушки, а справа отрицательные-или наоборот

[Nahla]

ничего ты в дядях , хуевер, не понимаешь.